2014년 10월 26일 일요일

First Draft

  We may don't notice this, but we are exposed to massive amount of advertising everyday. From newspapers to television, and even at the seat of the bus, you can face the advertisements.  They steal your mind and drag your interest to something you didn't care about. Some advertisements fail to do so, but still, the fact that they are everywhere is important. But, those things that advertising do, are not recognized as a positive effect but penetrating people. Some would think that advertisements are the things that should be avoided, like a case of SPAM mails. However, I want to argue that advertising is helpful to society.

  The original purpose of advertising is to announce someone or something to public. It's basic meaning is not an commercial image that we have been thinking of. And there are various type of advertising. We can just divide into two(like commercial advertising and public service advertising), but we can divide the type by the methods to advertise(print, guerrilla, broadcast, outdoor, mobile, online, etc). With the growing number of advertising methods and it's impact, the influence of advertising also skyrocketed. For example, the worldwide advertising market spend 500 billion US dollars total, remaining huge proportion on global market.

  Advertising is helpful to society. First of all, by raising production and consumption, it invigorates the world economy. Advertisements courage people to spend their money on particular products or services, and people's consumption make companies to produce. This role of advertising can keep the market stable by circulating money continuously. Second, advertising is the great indicator that helps consumers to make choices. Many companies use commercials to appeal their products or services' own attraction. What consumers have to do is finding the products or services which they prefer among the advertisements given to them, That's all. Without advertisements, consumers would waste much time to make choices. Lastly, advertising can raise public awareness. I want to introduce the advertisement 'The Return of Dictator Ben Ali'. It starts with people who are staring at the poster of Tunisian dictator Ben Ali, the video shows people's anger toward him. Then, one man goes in front of the poster and ask why don't they get rid of that poster and rip it. The poster took away with people's strong consent, and there was another poster at back of the one of Ben Ali's. There was a catchphrase, "Beware, dictatorship can return. On October 23rd, VOTE". This campaign initiated few days before Tunisian election and played a great role in re-awaking people's political engagement. Polls showed only 55% were planning to vote but after this campaign, 88% of Tunisian have engaged in voting. I think this can clearly show that advertisements can have a great influence to society in a good way.

  Some people will argue that people can make unwise, compulsive decision because of the various tricks in advertising. I have to admit that many studies including human psychology are used to make advertisements to make impression in people's thought. However, laws and standards are still banning the advertisements from sending wrong information to people. Advertising says truth. It is a burden of people to avoid unwise decision, and to receive it properly with critical attitude. And I think the example of public awareness advertising I suggested, can show that advertising leads to the wise decision. 

  Advertising is not a pest. It is not a thing to get rid of or to avoid. It can be a good thing as long as you think it's good. Most of problems made by advertising is not actually caused by advertising itself but its receivers. Advertisements should be thought as the Internet. On the Internet, we decide information whether to take it or drop it, and take what we think is needed. Advertisements are same. It needs our careful watch and critical view upon them. If we manage to do so, we can finally say that advertisements don't have to do with social problems. In conclusion, I strongly argue that advertisements are helpful to our society because they play a role in invigorating market, they help consumers to choose something, and they can lead to a growth of social awareness.

Source

  • http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=um5QvW5XHwY
  • http://adage.com/article/global-news/10-things-global-ad-market/245572/
  • http://advertising.about.com/od/advertisingprojects/a/Different-Types-Of-Advertising-Methods.htm
  • www.theceoinsights.com
  • http://smallbusiness.chron.com/explains-purpose-advertising-36432.html

Conclusion

  Advertising is not a pest. It is not a thing to get rid of or to avoid. It can be a good thing as long as you think it's good. Most of problems made by advertising is not actually caused by advertising itself but its receivers. Advertisements should be thought as the Internet. On the Internet, we decide information whether to take it or drop it, and take what we think is needed. Advertisements are same. It needs our careful watch and critical view upon them. In conclusion, I strongly argue that advertisements are helpful to our society because they play a role in invigorating market, they help consumers to choose something, and they can lead to a growth of social awareness.

Refutation and Concession

  Some people will argue that people can make unwise, compulsive decision because of the various tricks in advertising. I have to admit that many studies including human psychology are used to make advertisements to make impression in people's thought. However, laws and standards are still banning the advertisements from sending wrong information to people. Advertising says truth. It is a burden of people to avoid unwise decision, and to receive it properly with critical attitude. And I think the example of public awareness advertising I suggested, can show that advertising leads to the wise decision. 

Confirmation

  Advertising is helpful to society. First of all, by raising production and consumption, it invigorates the world economy. Advertisements courage people to spend their money on particular products or services, and people's consumption make companies to produce. This role of advertising can keep the market stable by circulating money continuously. Second, advertising is the great indicator that helps consumers to make choices. Many companies use commercials to appeal their products or services' own attraction. What consumers have to do is finding the products or services which they prefer among the advertisements given to them, That's all. Without advertisements, consumers would waste much time to make choices. Lastly, advertising can raise public awareness. I want to introduce the advertisement 'The Return of Dictator Ben Ali'. It starts with people who are staring at the poster of Tunisian dictator Ben Ali, the video shows people's anger toward him. Then, one man goes in front of the poster and ask why don't they get rid of that poster and rip it. The poster took away with people's strong consent, and there was another poster at back of the one of Ben Ali's. There was a catchphrase, "Beware, dictatorship can return. On October 23rd, VOTE". This campaign initiated few days before Tunisian election and played a great role in re-awaking people's political engagement. I think this can clearly show that advertisements can have a great influence to society in a good way.

Narration

  The original purpose of advertising is to announce someone or something to public. It's basic meaning is not an commercial image. And there are various type of advertising. We can just divide into two(like commercial advertising and public service advertising), but we can divide the type by the methods to advertise(print, guerrilla, broadcast, outdoor, mobile, online, etc). With the growing number of advertising methods and it's impact, the influence of advertising also skyrocketed.

Introduction

  We may don't notice this, but we are exposed to massive amount of advertising everyday. From newspapers to television, and even at the seat of the bus, you can face the advertisements.  They steal your mind and drag your interest to something you didn't care about. But, those things that advertising do, are not recognized as a positive effect but penetrating people. Some would think that advertisements are the things that should be avoided, like a case of SPAM mails. However, I argue that advertising is helpful to society.

Week 3- Articulation

1) My argument

I want to argue that the advertising is not harmful to society. The fact is that the advertising can raise awareness among public, advertising can make both active internal and external market.

2) How I found my argument

I started with my first research question 'What is the main purpose of advertising?'. I searched the meaning of the term 'advertise', and my overall definition of this word was 'to announce or praise someone or something to public'. Many people can think just promoting products and services are advertising, but I thought many of campaigns that struggled to change our society to a positive direction.

3) New research questions

  • Is increased consumption a harm to society?
  • What advertising can be a example of effecting society in a good way? 

4) Connections to the Harvard Sampler

My topic is related to the section about the Internet. Today, as the impact of the Internet rises, the proportion of the online advertising takes a great part of the all advertising. So, when I argue about advertising's effect, it is hard to ignore the role of the Internet.

What Best Explains the Purpose of Advertising?

Notes

  • Advertising, is it art or entertainment?
  • Common perception of advertising is related to begging.
  • Advertising typically promotes a particular product or service.
  • Advertising also designed to raise public awareness.
  • Advertising is a tool to inform and educate people about various issues.


Source: http://smallbusiness.chron.com/explains-purpose-advertising-36432.html